“Do you remember our first date?” she asked, as they admired the waterfall.
“Of course,” he smiled, “it was right here. You got drunk and nearly drowned.”
“I couldn’t swim, you saved my life. I felt…”
“Indebted to me?” he grinned.
“Something like that,” she frowned. “To be perfectly honest, I wouldn’t have gone out with you if that hadn’t happened.”
He stared, open mouthed.
“I didn’t love you,” she went on “I still don’t. It’s over.”
Suddenly furious, he threw her into the water.
She struggled briefly, then sank beneath the surface.
“Still can’t swim either, I see.”
Well that soured awfully quickly…
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Well Dale, we do only have 100 words 😀
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Haha! True!
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How rude. Guess she should have learned how to swim.
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He decision to break up was right given his temper, but choice of place was bad. Now she is swimming with the fish.
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Yes, she should at least have learned to swim before she broke up with him 😀
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Haha, love the last line! He’s a cold one.
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He certainly is 😀
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Crikey, swift bit of revenge there, although neither of them sounded particularly nice characters!
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Not the most sensible (or kind) way to dump him!
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That was quick, man. Brutally quick.
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Honesty certainly not the best policy here, not considering her lack of swimming skill and where they were.
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Blimey that was sudden! I doubt if she’d have been so honest if she’d known what his reaction would be.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Well in all fairness he didn’t have much time, he didn’t find out until the 77th word. 😀
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Dear JWD,
That’s was a cruel way to end the relationship. Over before it started. Nicely (?) done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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It seems her timing was a bit out, she should have broken it to him away from the water. Still it’s ended where it started. Neat
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That went well! I always think you should pick the time and place for the brush-off with infinite care. Nice one!
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Oh my, what a wonderfully gruesome tale. Sandra’s correct, you should pick the place carefully when dumping someone. Not too smart on her part. =)
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Not the best way to dump someone… I still think it could be a good idea to save her again
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Oy! She should have paid attention to her instincts!
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