Photo ©Jean L Hays
“Just the gas and a couple of questions,” said Fisk, flashing his badge.
Arvo nodded, barking “lleno!” to a Latino youth. They walked inside and Arvo began rummaging under the counter.
Fisk scanned his surroundings, trained eyes alighting on the fresh crimson spray that was missed during a hasty clean-up.
He reached inside his suit jacket just as the first bullet struck, piercing his palm and shattering his right ventricle, the second ripping apart his aorta.
Agent Sipovitz was just registering events as the third 9mm bullet made a jigsaw of his skull.
“Gordo!” shouted Arvo, “We got wheels again!”
Great work, loved the explosion of violence out of nowhere.
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Thank you 😊
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Brutal and graphic. Very nice 🙂
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Thanks 😀
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I guess Ileno is Gordo?
Great scene description
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No, actually it is a term meaning to fill the tank in Spanish. Thanks for reading and for your comments Dale 😀
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Ahhh… thanks for the clarification.
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This is visual like a Tarantino movie… love the sheer splatter…
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Lovely noir feel
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Thank you 😊
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Great violence, as already said like a Tarantino movie
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Shocking – no guilt, just pleasure that they have a car to use!
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Just grim, great writing. It felt like a really good TV crime program,
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Thank you Michael 😀
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