Friday Fictioneers is a group of people who write stories in response to a photo prompt posted every wednesday by our host, Rochelle Wisoff-Fields.
The challenge is to write a story that has a beginning a middle and an end while sticking to the word limit. To read other peoples entries click on the blue frog at the end of the story. I hope you enjoy this offering. 🙂
Photo prompt – copyright of J Hardy Carroll
Cyprian The Slayer (100 Words)
Cyprian studied the huge keyring from the auction house and selected a large black key with worn, jagged teeth. The rusty lock mechanism resisted briefly before turning with a sudden snap.
Forcing open the reluctant gate, he passed through into a wild and long neglected garden. He sighed, dismayed at the scale of his task, then began his search.
When at last he found the grave of Bogdan Capescau, shadowy fingers cast by the crenelated roof reached out in warning that day’s end drew perilously close.
Placing his mallet and stake on the grass beside him, he began to dig.
I like the way the whole story turned on the phrase “placing his mallet and stake”. Well done.
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Thank you Sandra 🙂
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He’d better dig fast – they’re easier to kill before they “rise again”! Great story, I didn’t see a vampire story coming.
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Great twist!
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Nicely done. Creepy and suspenseful. Great job.
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Bogdan Capescau – love it!
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I did not expect the twist at the end, just great.
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Thank you, I am glad you liked it. 😀
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Ah.. it became clear what was at stake… this is something that you have to do in daylight… I dig it.
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Oh, great twist, I didn’t see it coming either. Should have, if I had paid attention to the title. Dig faster, Cyprian.
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Gothic from start to finish. There’s a big story in those 100 words.
Tracey
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He better get digging quick. Great Gothic feel and atmosphere.
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